oh ee cummings pt. 2

[machinery]

a furious wing display a-fly
soar soar up 'n up
where the sun has rose
and the stars have drank
-those silly magic drippings from
some other orbit
-ye know...beyond the blue-green
of the earth
so spread yer display
of vast feathers so
rip the blues & whites
of aerial grounds
take away the songs from the various Cronus'
throne yer self!
Crooner of words
swim the wind
& crack yer beak
to flash a crass smirk
as to say
you own the zones of departure
& arrival
bring'n forth yer taunty ruffian ways
& set straight the wings
of weak

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[sarafinamable]

machinery, this is very good
i don't really have much else to say about it. i read some of your other things and i think they are wonderful.
thankyou for replying to one of mine.
i met you at a party here at ISU a little while ago., you were the person who recommended me to this site. thankyou, i'll keep reading your stuff.
you write very wonderful, and descriptive.

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this is life, you don't have to be perfect

[machinery]

yass, i remember, holms rite?

anyway-about the poem:

rite now i am in the process of revision on this one

I'm trying to use the letters F & V
to incorporate a fricative feel...

mass changes here mass changes

anyhow, thanks for posting
&
keep it up.



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